Nowadays we
use the word « business» in our daily communication. A
business also known as an enterprise,firm or agency which is involved in
production of goods or services. Business is something we have been doing
during the whole life.
Starting your own business is more popular
nowadays. If you want to start a business, you need think well and mediate all
pros and cons. Starting your own business is one of the most good ways to make
extra money month after month. Of course, in order to start you need money, in
order to invest your business. If you do everything good, you will meet such
people as competitor, retailer, employee, supplier or investor. It easy to
create something new just write a business plan, it will help you to run your business
successfully; get
business assistance ( take advantage of counseling services);choose a business location( consult
with your friends); register a business name; and register for state taxes, get a
business licenses or permits.
To sum up, I want to say,that business is
very interesting job. It will help you to realize all your ideas, thoughts, you
will meet new people and make an acquaintance.
The main idea of the post is what a person should do to start his or her business. I don`t really think that introduction is effective because it doesn`t spotlight the main idea of the whole text. And to my mind it doesn`t have any connection to the second paragraph. In order to improve it the author should have written the first part the main question of the post.
ВідповістиВидалитиThe main keys of the text are different steps that a person should overcome in order to open his or her own business and several tips which can help us with this. All this keys have examples which are easy to understand.
The conclusion of the post is effective as it encourages us for work and shows the importance of starting a new business.
As to different mistakes here in order to avoid tautology it is better to use some other words instead of "business", than "one of the most good ways"-"of the best ways", "in order to start you need money, in order to invest your business" here it is better to say "For starting a new business you need money on order to invest your company" or something like that, "It is easy to create...just writing" and here to my mind are a lot of unnecessary punctuation marks.
Most of all I liked that this post is quite short so you are not bothered reading it and the second thing is that the author expressed his personal point of view.
The question: "How to create a business plan?"
In conclusion I want to say that if this post had more examples and more active words it would be better, but it is okay. I think I will evaluate this post as "good".
The main idea of this post is what a person should do to start his own business. I think the introduction is quite good, but the post hasn't any title.
ВідповістиВидалитиThe author gave us some useful tips, which may help us to do own business, and she provided them with different evidence.
I didn't find any faults in terms of spelling, grammar. But there are some mistakes in sentence structure, and the previous commentator said about them.
In general, I like this post, because it is short and easy to read, and of course was useful pieces of advice for future businessman. But, as for me, the author have to use more active vocabulary.
The main idea of the post is what people should do in order to start their business.
ВідповістиВидалитиI think that introduction is effective because it is simply and clearly and also it explains the main word of this post – “business”. The author gives us some useful tips in order to start business. To my mind, the conclusion is good because the author to summarizes and says the whole text and say that business helps us to realize all our ideas, thoughts; we can meet new people and also it is very interesting job.
The author uses an active vocabulary. The structure of sentences isn’t overload of hard grammatical constructions.
I like this post because the author motivates us to start our own business and gives us good pieces of advices. The post is interesting and it deserves the best mark.