How to become a successful businessman?
Businessman is a person engaged in business
activities and receives income from its activities. He or she can be engaged in
the production, sale or provision of services. Every sphere has a lot of
varieties of which could be addressed. The main thing is to choose something
that you like.
First of all, you simply find yourself in life. In
order to become a businessman you must act decisively. You should spotlight
your ingenuity, responsibility and inventiveness.
You must
understand when you creating your own business, you become an independent
person. You must learn to rely only on yourself and on your own strength.
Secondly, you have to change your thinking because a
businessman thinks completely differently than employees. You
must pave the way for your business. Business is always an interesting idea that
stands out from the rest. If you have such an idea, you should implement it in
life.
Competition is an unpleasant thing, but eternal. It
has always been and will be. A competition should not be forgotten, but
constantly thinking about it should not be. Competitors will be looking for
your flaws in business. It
is directed against all and all live with it. You should create something brand
new or maybe something that you upgraded.
A lot of
businessmen are afraid of making mistakes. Remember those who
do nothing make no mistakes. You should not be afraid of making mistakes.
In the
first place, if you have some great
idea of starting a business, you have to act and embody it in life. In order to
become a successful businessman, a person must be persistent and
hard working. If these qualities are not developed in a person, it helps
motivation. The most popular motivation now is to provide for themselves and
their families a decent life.
Therefore go
confidently to your goal and never give up!
This post tells us about a businessman and about different complicated things than he has to face on his way to reach a success.
ВідповістиВидалитиI think that introduction is effective because it states the main idea of the whole text.
The key argument of the post is what a person should do to become a businessman. The author gives us good tips in order to reach our goal, for example, to change our behavior, to be more communicative and so on. Also the author pointed out the difficulties which can appear on our way to a success.
The conclusion seems to me to be effective because of its motivation and it makes us act.
As to grammar mistakes here we have "a businessman is a person", "than the employees", the word "business" can be replaced by the word "it" in some cases in order to avoid tautology, «A competition should not be forgotten, but you must not think about it all the time."
Than we have such part as: "A lot of businessmen are afraid of making mistakes. Remember those who do nothing make no mistakes. You should not be afraid of making mistakes." here the word mistake is used very often and the third sentence doesn`t take any semantic meaning because the first sentence stands the meaning of the third, "then helps motivation".
I like this post because it is easy to understand and the author motivated us with it. It pointed out different steps which one should do in order to reach his goals.
The question is: The author mentioned that you have to create something brand new but if you don’t` have an inspiration how one can do it?"
Our topics are on the same theme but in my post I used more active moments.
To sum up I want to say that it is quite useful text and here the author expressed his point of view, the grammar mistakes are not so serious and this post has some pictures, so I think that I will give the best mark.
I think that the main idea of the post answering the question « How to become a successful businessman ». The post have some information about businessman and have a good introduction. The author give us good steps in order to be a good businessman. There were a lot of active moments. The conclusion is effective, because it inspire us never give up. I think that its really useful information for those, who is afraid to do something new and the author expressed his point of view and to call us to do a new things. As for my post I have the same idea, and the same active words. To sum up I want to say that I like this post, it easy to read and understand. Good introduction, effective conclusion an idea, that why I give a high point to this video.
ВідповістиВидалитиThe main idea of the post is how to become a successful businessman. The introduction is effective because the author opened the main theme and told us who a businessman is.
ВідповістиВидалитиShe gave a lot of evidence to support the main idea and give some useful pieces of advice for person to start his own business.
In conclusion she wrote that person should never give up and be hard-working. To my mind, it is the good end to the post, because it motivates people to act.
What about grammar mistakes I did not find that, but there are some trouble in sentence structure. For example, "A lot of businessmen are afraid of making mistakes. Remember those who do nothing make no mistakes. You should not be afraid of making mistakes." The word "mistake" is used very often here. You should change it with other synonyms.
There are a lot of active vocabulary and all the words are underline. It is good, because we easily can find them. Also the post is easy to read.
In general, I like it, because the author gave us interesting information and very useful tips, which we can use if one day we want to do own business.
The main idea of this post is how to become a successful businessman. The introduction is good. It helps us to understand what about this post will be. It is really nice because the reader can understand at once does he or she really want to read this post. The author gives us some tips on how to reach a success in business. Also, the author tells us about some problems that businessman can face. It is very informative for readers. There are some problems with tautology. The post is informative, interesting and simple in understanding. Also, I liked that there are a lot of active words. Our topics are on the same theme but I think that my post is maybe a little bit more well-structured. I really like picture of a little mouse. It is very cute. And also, I like that the author try to inspire readers with a help of some motivate sentences. I think that this post is good and informative and I would give it the highest mark.
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