“Every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once he grows up.”
― Pablo Picasso
The artist’s mind is not well understood, ― Pablo Picasso
It’s full of mysteries and dreams,
But its intent is to enrich and to do good.
Conjuring up images with fitful gleams.
The artist’s works may be eccentric for a while,
It may be even off-the-wall and strange,
But it evokes new feelings and a pleasant smile,
And gives a push to move and change,
And then this power of creation
Can help to rise above mundane,
Creative impulse of sensation,
Can temper head and heart again.
Can elevate some common things,
And help to introduce your own conception
Of molding shapes of images that your mind brings,
Conveying into new inventions.
Are you an artist? Yes, you are,
And day from day we view how you create and act,
No matter really who we are,
We can all be an artist who can astonish and make effect.
The main idea of the post is to tell us that everyone can be an artist, to introduce us the art. I think that the first part of this post as much as the conclusion is effective, also to write a poem instead of a text is unusual and interesting. The author creates his own art whle writing about art. Also I like that the author uses a quotation of Pablo Picasso, it shows that she knows what she writes about and that she likes art. She uses a lot of active vocabulary and I didn`t find mistakes. So I will give the highest mark.
ВідповістиВидалитиThe main idea of the post is to show that everyone can be an artist. I agree with this opinion because even if person does not paint, for example, on paper she or he creates her life and every person decides which colours to add in her life. The author tells us about art. It is quite interesting post because it is written in unusual form. The post has vocabulary which is underline. I didn’t find any faults in grammar and sentence structure. The conclusion is clearly. The author motivates us to remember that every person is artist. People should not be afraid to experiment and create something new.
ВідповістиВидалитиMost of all I liked that the post it written as a poem and that is why it stands out among the others. Despite this author was able to use active words and reveal its theme. To write poetry is difficult especially if you write it not in the native language. I think that it takes extra time and effort. And this necessarily requires inspiration. So, I think that the post deserves the best mark.
The main idea of the post is to show that everyone can be an artist. I agree with this opinion because even if person does not paint, for example, on paper she or he creates her life and every person decides which colours to add in her life. The author tells us about art. It is quite interesting post because it is written in unusual form. The post has vocabulary which is underline. I didn’t find any faults in grammar and sentence structure. The conclusion is clearly. The author motivates us to remember that every person is artist. People should not be afraid to experiment and create something new.
ВідповістиВидалитиMost of all I liked that the post it written as a poem and that is why it stands out among the others. Despite this author was able to use active words and reveal its theme. To write poetry is difficult especially if you write it not in the native language. I think that it takes extra time and effort. And this necessarily requires inspiration. So, I think that the post deserves the best mark.
The main idea of this post is to persuade us that everyone can be an artist.
ВідповістиВидалитиThe introduction is really impressive as the author used the form of a poem but not of a text. Besides, the body of the post and it's conclusion are also very impressive. This was achieved by the special, personal style of writing the post. There were no mistakes in terms of spelling. And nothing hampered my understanding of this post. Besides, active vocabulary was used correctly.
I really like the thing that the author used the quotation by Pablo Picasso.
In comparison with my writing this one is really unique and impressive. The style is unusual and catchy.
The overall impression is very pleasant as the author used a lot of active vocabulary and didn't make mistakes. Besides, she managed to catch our attention, so she deserves the highest mark.
The main idea of the post is to tell us that everyone can be an artist. It has impressive introduction, and I think that it is effective to write a poem instead of a text as unusual and. While writing about art the author do art. Also i want to underline the quotation of Pablo Picasso. The using of this one is make me think that the author know things. She uses a lot of active vocabulary and I didn`t find mistakes. So I will give the highest mark.
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