Every person can be a creator
What is art? A lot of people consider it to be an occupation of musicians, painters, designers, film-makers, sculptors and photographers. But to my mind everyone can create something that will push the limits of normal things, something that seems to be special for him or her.
Many of people think that they don`t have imagination and creativity to make something unique. Judging by myself I always find my pictures or poems ugly or even worse, even when others appreciate them. Tell me, how many times did you think about creating something and everytime when you didn`t like your creation you gave up and just did nothing? I think your answer is a lot of times. But tell me did you continue to draw, to write music or to do other staff? I think your answer is also will be "yes". What conclusion can we make out this? You should try and you will reach a success.
My point is if you want to take up art you should have an idea to put it in practice. If you don`t have this one you can find an inspiration in things that surround you. Believe me, even the times of your gteatest despair and happiness can be a source of it.
So, in this small paragraph I want to say that if you do something that brings you pleasure just do it. Don`t let your dreams be dreams. Do everything in order to reach your goal. And remember, even if you create something that other people or you consider to be ugly, it still can be art. Do not lose youe chance to show the world your opinion.
The main idea of the post is every person should not be afraid to create something new. If you create something that brings you pleasure just do it. I think that the post has effective introduction. The author doesn’t use complicated terms. Also the post has some wonderful pictures which motivated us to believe in our dreams and success. In addition the author uses some rhetorical questions that make reading more interesting.
ВідповістиВидалитиIn conclusion the author summarizes the post and also says that people should do everything in order to reach a goal. The post has active words which is underline. It is good because when my classmates read it they pay attention to the words. This post has only one misprint in the last sentences “Do not lose YOUE chance to show the world your opinion.” However, it isn’t significant mistake.
So, this post is quite interesting and exciting. I think that the post deserves the best mark.
The whole post is about being creative and the author tries to persuade us that all of us are creators and every person can take up art.
ВідповістиВидалитиThe introduction is very effective. The author caught my attention in no time by asking a question at the very beginning. And then the author explains the answer to this question.
We can find several key points in this post. At first, we are explained that everyone can be creative. Secondly, the author give the example from her own life. Thirds, we get the information about inspiration and achieving our goals.
The conclusion is really effective as it calls us upon being creative. The author inspires us to fulfill our dreams.
There were several mistakes in the post. But they didn't hamper my understanding of the text. The active grammar and vocabulary were used correctly. The mistakes were in these sentences: "many of people" - without "of"; "I think your answer will also be yes"; "what conclusions can we make out OF this?"; "greatest"; "your chance".
Most of all I liked the facts that this text is really inspiring. It's not hard to understand. It is really easy to read it, just for pleasure.
My question is "Will you give me your poems to read?:)"
The overall impression is very pleasant. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this post. I'd make it Excellent
The post is about creativity and the author wants us to be creative. The introduction is very effective. It is very good to start with a question. It catch reader`s attention. I really like that the author asks quetions during the whole post. Also, it is very good that the author tells us about her own experience even when it isn`t the best one. She try to make us more brave and don`t be affraid of fails. She tells us to try as many times as we need to reach the success. Not to give up on our dreams. The conclusion is very good too. It gives us hope and inspire us.
ВідповістиВидалитиThere are some mistakes. Sometimes the author put "of" where it doesnt`t need to be and forgot to put it where it is need to be. And also "youe". But I think this mistake was made because the athor was very immersed in sence of her words ;).
I would like to see the author`s pictures :).
I really like this post and it inspire me to do some art :).
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